never give up on your hopes and dreams
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never give up on your hopes and dreams

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3 years ago

Hi there @daviyoneparmer, Here's some feedback on your track 'never give up on your hopes and dreams', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

I got new battles and new contest entry pinned hope you enjoy much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 👌 👍 #TmDantayTheDunsay #TmHoodIntensity #TmAsInYourShit hope you enjoy 👌

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