am the boss
Jazzmo Desto101 Plays
•28 Oct 2021
am the boss am am the god am the guard make me honry make me have it make me taste it make me fuck it am a nigggle have my title make me feable make them tremble take the risk you got a skate take the myths you gonna breath take the ass you gonna fuck make me honey make me have it make me taste it make me fuck it make fame play game make home make the gate mine is shy fine be mine time be tight play the game slay to bed tweet the twig sweet on bed split the wing give a kisss
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @jazzmodesto, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'am the boss'! 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Overall great effort on this track! Keep workin' on your lyrics. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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