Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @davonteyoung, Here's some feedback on your track 'diss track ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 Great beat choice, really works with the track! There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! 🥵 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Im the beast

3 years ago

on my brother