mist

6 Plays

24 Oct 2021

i know deep in side, i need a othere way, to make it be ok ,eaven if its not the same i know ur love for me will never change and it comes to date ,id made the big mastake for not loveing u the best, very deep inside,i see my salfe with hate from all the eavle way argue evey day want to make me understand i beter do my best to get up and change the brain best thing i should have done it best to soport u in ways that i should has to be set but just know in the middle of my chest i tore oway the demons from the dust that try to take me to my grave all because my hope i lost it wen i went away and theres no othere way th tell u that i look st the best thing in my life with tears i sit up in my bunk in the middle of the night remenesin on them time that i made u smile seeing happnes ur face chrushes me but hey that was just mistrust entrust

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3 years ago

What's up @cesarcastanon, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'mist'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time! Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Great beat choice, really works with the track! We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

i know deep in side, i need a othere way, to make it be ok ,eaven if its not the same i know ur love for me will never change and it comes to date ,id made the big mastake for not loveing u the best, very deep inside,i see my salfe with hate from all the eavle way argue evey day want to make me understand i beter do my best to get up and change the brain best thing i should have done it best to soport u in ways that i should has to be set but just know in the middle of my chest i tore oway the demons from the dust that try to take me to my grave all because my hope i lost it wen i went away and theres no othere way th tell u that i look st the best thing in my life with tears i sit up in my bunk in the middle of the night remenesin on them time that i made u smile seeing happnes ur face chrushes me but hey that was just mistrust entrust

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