Joey Oneil

by your side

Joey Oneil
by your side

10 Plays

24 Oct 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hi there @joeyoneil, Here's some feedback on your track 'by your side', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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