Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @germanslackzalot, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Gangsta (16:16:34)'! 💥 A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

I got new battles please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmYourFugly #TmYourNotSoCold hope you enjoy 👌

German Slackzalot

3 years ago

#freestyling messing around