Young Erin

3 years ago

I'm sorry about that.

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @youngerin, It's time for us to take a look at 'Oreo '! 💥 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Good choice of beat! 🎼 Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎