Antonio David

3 years ago

@antoniodavid.4854

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @antoniodavid.4854! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'take it to the top '! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Antonio David

3 years ago

I got God in my pocket as he gives me the locket to my success my mind be so stressed but one day ima be next to the top as I'm the only nigga without a job but still wake up and count 3 bands like I'm on a new Era brandMy name is the kid with no commen sense I want see Amelia even for a cost of million cents nothing in life gives me happiness but the joyfullness of my daughter every day us and life get harder but each night I stride thru I'm stronger this is my prison my self punishment for my dishonor as I can't expect to nor suffer to be the one and be better we must stay humble stay to ground level then I grav my shovel rise up like a novel super man had no stand but tto3 can make his girl and the whole world say wow he go Loco but really I've acquired more knowledge then you can ever seeTo be me you must be super being as they know I'm the only human who drunk ammonia and has his stomach ND heart let's keep this success at a good start hopefully I don't get to my head led by sex and women head hopefully I'm cleanse as my soul is refresh to my point of being my best put it up to my ultimate test I survived the lowest and did the hardest thing I've had to go thru poverty and a disgrace to my old self well miss you a lot but we both know we're bad for not we wouldn't be enjoying a time apart so long my heart fears the part of my sin against u levels the same as a death sentence for jews good night tell Amelia Dada war is almost done and when time Comes lol be glowing like the risinf sun I got God in my pocket as he gives me the locket to my success my mind be so stressed but one day ima be next to the top as I'm the only nigga without a job but still wake up and count 3 bands like I'm on a new Era brandMy name is the kid with no commen sense I want see Amelia even for a cost of million cents nothing in life gives me happiness but the joyfullness of my daughter every day us and life get harder but each night I stride thru I'm stronger this is my prison my self punishment for my dishonor as I can't expect to nor suffer to be the one and be better we must stay humble stay to ground level then I grav my shovel rise up like a novel super man had no stand but tto3 can make his girl and the whole world say wow he go Loco but really I've acquired more knowledge then you can ever seeTo be me you must be super being as they know I'm the only human who drunk ammonia and has his stomach ND heart let's keep this success at a good start hopefully I don't get to my head led by sex and women head hopefully I'm cleanse as my soul is refresh to my point of being my best put it up to my ultimate test I survived the lowest and did the hardest thing I've had to go thru poverty and a disgrace to my old self well miss you a lot but we both know we're bad for not we wouldn't be enjoying a time apart so long my heart fears the part of my sin against u levels the same as a death sentence for jews good night tell Amelia Dada war is almost done and when time Comes lol be glowing like the risinf sun