problems

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16 Oct 2021

yeah I see u in ur dreams but I know what it takes me I know you want my money but I've hurt you and that's enough I promise I gave you all my heart and don't take me seriously and considering y am I always not home but it's all about the party hitting my homies and getting drunk and getting ready to go back in the morning shift I fucked bit by bit hitting all my sweet love and getting all my money getting paid getting rich as I can see living large making my episode,songs,games,app and dreams and life is hard hope I make it it's a risk but I take it living stuck in the basement aaa

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hey @ofentseseolwane, We appreciate you sharing 'problems' with us! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. The key to freestyle is practicing as much as possible. Give yourself different topics and challenge yourself. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Our Masterclasses are a great way to improve your rhythm and flow. Try it out! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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