no love lost, just time
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•14 Oct 2021
this was a poem i wrote about a situation between my father and i. we have a interesting relationship to say the least. (i got daddy issues) disclaimer... he is the best provider one could ask for as long as its under his terms.
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grateful for the feedback its the only way to get better
Hey @MannyBrascoMusic, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'no love lost, just time'! 💥 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording is solid, everything is clear. ✔ The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! ⭐ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
this was a poem i wrote about a situation between my father and i. we have a interesting relationship to say the least. (i got daddy issues) disclaimer... he is the best provider one could ask for as long as its under his terms.
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