Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @nateanderson.9637, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'make your mark'! 💥 Put some work into your bars, the more original the more you'll stand out. Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

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Nate Anderson

3 years ago

we be trying Play the part like everybody's makes the mark the government controls the art and public parks and benihanas came to dinner in designas she a 10 in pink pajamas like 2003 Atlanta red sip in the fanaa we be trying Play the part nah everybody make your mark if Rosa parks and Noah's then you know God's the only spark inside this dark perfect