Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @dylankinnibrugh! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'hardway'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Great beat choice, really works with the track! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dylan Kinnibrugh

3 years ago

second thoughts boxed in with all I lost from the battles i done faught Tired of the stomach knots.. Wonder if I'll see tomorrow Reaper gotta get creative I drop dead right now could list the snakes I know would celebrate it.. Had to take the blade to strings cutting off circulation.. .. evacuated circles love I gave, not rotated.. .. Gave up on love I couldn't let my heart take no more breaking.. .. Packed my bags, got out the trap I realized I created.. .. Worried who gon get the room, that I choose to leave vacant Felt betrayed, I threw the key Whoever wants it go and take it~~.. Not my problem, wish the best even to everybody fakin.. no matter the situation momma, promise imma make it.. Never stole from men but I'd be lying to y'all faces, If I said some meals weren't curteousy of global corporations.. Days I had no dollars to my name, I broke and made the changes.. Bled for this, you really got some nerve if you come tryna take it.. having a big hearts a heavy burden takes control, the crave, to take away, the pain of someone hurting knowing you gon wind up hurt the love it never got returned use the fire as your fuel or you gon sit and watch or burn bitches fake homies change theres just some shit you gotta learn the haaaaard way the hard way hard times made the hard times easier reflect on my mistakes I know my daughter watching me gotta be careful what im teachin her ..Been thru shit I don't release in public conversations.. Long way from statements, autographing affidavits.. Maker blessed me with my daughter, she don't know it but she saved me.. Pray in advance to my maker, next person that try to play me.. Left the knife's stabbed in my back bloodstained and all, reminder how it feel Everytime I'm up against the wall.. do me wrong and still got the audacity to call me dog, Fool me once won't fool me twice Ill play the field and make the call.. Hit you where it hurt, No bruises shown Bet it leave a mark.. Hit my peak, Took some time to breathe That's when it fell apart.. Not looking for no remedy.. This ain't a cry for sympathy.. This my life story of my neverending misery..