The some of the Mentalist this is true it happened to me
I took all your advice, never thought my life was the price, your advice was to sacrifice my life, i believed you, now i know it wasnt all my fault it was just all lies i cried and cried at night and to you guys it was a game a game of Thrones. look into my fucking eyes now im fucking wise. you and all your guys full with the lies makes other people cry. U picked me up took me in. promised me everything bought me everything to make my dreams come true. He made me feel like i could be and live like a king, then you asked me to take this ring and he reversed the lie, and told me there is no more bling im going to put you on a swing like i have your life in my hand buy a peace of string!!!! unless you take this ring then ill let people here how you sing. I looked up into the blue skies and said lord give me a sign an angel let him take me under his wing coz i want to sing a song what he done to me was totally wrong every night its like a fight coz know that im right im the only one in this fight.no w8 its never to late coz i got the fate to reopen that gate. with all my hate you will be to late to open my gate welcome to my gate number 8.
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I took all your advice, never thought my life was the price, your advice was to sacrifice my life, i believed you, now i know it wasnt all my fault it was just all lies i cried and cried at night and to you guys it was a game a game of Thrones. look into my fucking eyes now im fucking wise. you and all your guys full with the lies makes other people cry. U picked me up took me in. promised me everything bought me everything to make my dreams come true. He made me feel like i could be and live like a king, then you asked me to take this ring and he reversed the lie, and told me there is no more bling im going to put you on a swing like i have your life in my hand buy a peace of string!!!! unless you take this ring then ill let people here how you sing. I looked up into the blue skies and said lord give me a sign an angel let him take me under his wing coz i want to sing a song what he done to me was totally wrong every night its like a fight coz know that im right im the only one in this fight.no w8 its never to late coz i got the fate to reopen that gate. with all my hate you will be to late to open my gate welcome to my gate number 8.
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Yo @slicksonic88! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'The some of the Mentalist this is true it happened to me'! 💥 Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! Good choice of beat! 🎼 Your use of effects is pretty good on this, nicely done! ⭐ Great energy, such chill vibes. 🌊 Make sure you watch out for your timing on the beat, not far off though. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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