Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @lil_richii.5704, Here's some feedback on your track 'Makin money', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

lil_richii

3 years ago

making this money... Makin it fast, boutta go stick it in her ass, this hoe getting passed like a doobie, reminds me of the scoobie Doobie do. who... you. you a hoe can't take yo dumbass no mo all abt the cash getting ass keeping the hustle no one getting in ma way or there gon say hi to ma glock. sike hoe tha ain a glock it's ma cock. rub it like yo foot in a sock what fuck did I jus say thas kinda gay like 5.0 on the way. run. run. run. run. yuh jus run running from the life tha it once was. struggle nun can pass but the hoe u once was.