Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @timothymichael.353, We appreciate you sharing 'Demons' with us! 💥 Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! 🤙 Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Clear recording here, this really helps add to your track. ✔ We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Timothy Michael

3 years ago

I got these demons in my head They got me felling like im goin brain dead I know im seventeen but im scared to tuck myself into bed I want to be free but they have me shackled to my bed I told my mama im sorry for what i said She went through hours of hell giving me birth and life to this earth but im nothing but a fuckin mistake with a fuckin curse been a discrase since birth What the hell am i even worth I toke those pills from my mama How do you think i got them at four it was out of her purse I thank her for my birth ho no i dont i just look at her in mirf and i can honestly say there ant nobody doper then me unless you stick your vains and snort cokecane Ho ya i forgot i just did that know im bouncing off the walls like im bain You can see that im not the same im completely insane I sheed tears of blood unstoppable shame I lay in the street while it rains slit my rest i can see the vains Everything turnin black the angels they just came but the demonds pull me under Where they will ingulf my fuckin soul into flames.