Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @revelation.2985! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Forgiveness'! 💥 Your bars could use a little flair to help you stand out from your fellow rappers! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎