Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @kathrynschouten! Welcome to our feedback of 'any day'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Think you could dial back the effects a little. Sometimes less is more. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Kathryn Schouten

3 years ago

any day i can make the semi spray nothing more to say when I make you lay down forever my drip is wetter flow is better let up never the set up clever as i endeavor to get the cheddar place every letter on a stretcher all this pressure gives me pleasure im the treasure so up to me you cannot measure flip the lever cuz whosoever thinks they're fresher needs a refresher or a limb severed can never be censored i haven't surrendered to the pretenders or the vendors of shiny splendors youre all rendered unremembered while i was centered cash was tendered new realms were entered past is checkered they say I'm ill tempered no gain when nothing ventured so you I mentored now you're indentured scarred and weathered hard and leathered tarred and feathered