The crash of your shit.
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•04 Oct 2021
Im droppin the bass Like ash Did you have a crash? Or are you just fucking trash I dont know why we clash Your just ass We can just talk Your like a fucking mock (useless) You talk like a rock There no fucking shock We all fucking know it Maybe in a bit You can learn how to make a hit Overall i just spit On your shit Just fucking commit Or maybe go back to knit Ot just sit Think about life Overall you dont seem alive Now its just five Maybe yiu should strive To survive As i just sigh.
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Wassup @gawrgura.7909, Thank you for sharing 'The crash of your shit. ' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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