look i,am rich
olivia_Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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Hey @olivia_.7625, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'look i,am rich'! 💥 Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Try not to overuse effects, it can better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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