Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @mjnotplayin, Here's some feedback on your track 'Damage (18:11:10)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. 🎼 We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

mjnotplayin

3 years ago

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