Incorrect

63 Plays

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03 Oct 2021

Thinking to much about my condition, Not my head but just fucking listen, Like a clit you'll just go missing, 2 arms, 3 legs, you better beg for position, Wna pop and pop, I may not even make the choice to stop, Like a black sheep, of the family, Sucky sucky so no mum dont stop, Il go down like parachuting to the ground, Aswell as cinderella when she was on top, Like a gangsta, no i wont fucking rot, Fuck this fuck that, Check the status, you better believe me, Like a beatboxer, showing up these turds, Going left and right, with no prolife, They say, 'stop the acting you', I just see the spiral.

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Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Hi @connordixon.6121! Welcome to our feedback of ' Incorrect '! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ŸŽง Can't hear your vocals too well on this one, make sure you're the right distance from your mic. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Nearly there, just try improve the recording quality! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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