my true story
45 Plays
โข03 Oct 2021
police stady watching me everyday they clocking me red alert im dangerous with that glock on me, and I don't mean for trouble im just looking out for me June 1st my nigga thats the real Halloween, (slow)be cool u get ur bitch ass smoked im talking war nigga rest in piss dj cause he got smoked nigga two shots to the head now he gotta go nigga hit yo mamma up now we about to roll nigga caught more body's than moe3 no disrespect
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hi @lilblack90! Welcome to our feedback of 'my true story '! ๐ฅ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. We like that you have tried to tell us your story here, perhaps give it another go and tell us more about your background. You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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