Lee Mallory

2 years ago

tshepang 5120 and also give me a follow me keep up the good work

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @tshepang.5120! Welcome to our feedback of 'make it happen ❤️A.K.A tshepang'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Lovin' the vocal level, it's the perfect volume over the beat so we can hear both. ✅ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. 🌠 Why not throw in some lyrics from your pen to add a little fire to the next track? Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tshepang

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.