djholmes

fire

djholmes
 fire

29 Plays

30 Sep 2021

bro look at you,you look like crab probably cause your crap ass ill grab this is an easy win in the bag cause your bad trash bin imma aboutta win you got a stick up your ass you need to fix that slash across your face I be destroying every vace bashing them with a mace and then ill get called to grace your a dissgrace to the human race in every way throw down a well deep down to hell will I be ring all the bells casting every spell known to man kind wrap your ass in a vine its time to bine and ryhm but ass you see this man cant even ryhm with knee and pee and the grinches tree let alone win a fight with a bee you wish you could be me to be the king look at you with no flo even though you a hoe oops I gotta go.

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3 years ago

damm bro that's good as keep going lad👍

3 years ago

Hey @djholmes, We're gonna review your track ' fire '. Let's get it! Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Jheez! This mix is perfect, you have a great mix between your vocals and the beat. ✅ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Great beat choice, really works with the track! There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

bro look at you,you look like crab probably cause your crap ass ill grab this is an easy win in the bag cause your bad trash bin imma aboutta win you got a stick up your ass you need to fix that slash across your face I be destroying every vace bashing them with a mace and then ill get called to grace your a dissgrace to the human race in every way throw down a well deep down to hell will I be ring all the bells casting every spell known to man kind wrap your ass in a vine its time to bine and ryhm but ass you see this man cant even ryhm with knee and pee and the grinches tree let alone win a fight with a bee you wish you could be me to be the king look at you with no flo even though you a hoe oops I gotta go.

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