Rich (12:38)
Jahnile Belisle148 Plays
•29 Sep 2021
Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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Hey @jahnilebelisle, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Rich (12:38)'! 💥 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 You've clearly mastered rapping with a Masterclass. Now why not try recording a track with your own lyrics! Love how you've tried to bring a faster flow to this Masterclass, not many people do that. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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