Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @cockpunch, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'I'm giving up on you '! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. 🎼 The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. This is wavy, love the laid back feel. 🌊 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Cock Punch

3 years ago

Say something, I’m giving up on you I’m sorry that I couldn’t get to you Anywhere, I would’ve followed you Say something, I’m giving up on you And I will swallow my pride You’re the one that I love And I’m saying goodbye I think we all have faced the moment described above. These lines express the sorrow and humility we feel when we decide to leave someone we love. In this piano ballad, the poetic “I” implores for a statement from his lover to make the lyrical voice stay.