Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @slicksinister, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Dear Dad'! 💥 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Dope work with the effects, nicely done. ⭐ Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. 💜 Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Slick Sinister

3 years ago

I remember growing up so many nights i wouldnt eat And i was father less which explains why i couldn't sleep The World was on my shoulders all that weight wasn't Good for me I would stay up searching for a dad that wouldnt look for me But all that searchin turned my soul into a Pack of ice. Im just tryna vent and dump my Pain in the trash tonight Move on then its back to life Im tryna make a stack a night This is more then a cycle, this a battle that i have to fight Viscous life , you hear Pain in my words, I look around and witness so much hate on this earth But that hate cant compare to the hate on this verse Or the anger that i felt when he was late for my birth Or the hunger that i felt when i would wait for the first my life changed when i got a taste of that curse My way to remember you is ur mugshot on my dresser I Thought time would heal me but its making it worse When i write you... you don't ever write back I been on the right track I don't ever want to treat people like you had Im just tryna vent pain, dad thats why i like rap Besides that i wonder why my mother never chose to fight back I wished you stayed but thats a dream that I will never see , But now a dead beat dad is something that I'll never be From day 1 i promised myself if I ever have a son that's something i will never be . So shout out to my dad for making me a better me