the storm
!Lost soul no hope lost goals more dope is how the song gos I hung my self off a long rope you an tell by the beginning of the convo that my heat is broken and I'm in search of the gene in the bottle I wish my soul did feel so hollow I don't want to die alone that's a hard pull to swallow say good by to yesterday day and hello tomorrow Smashing full throttle with no safety belt all gas no breaks the way I grew up I don't know how secure and safety felt that was just the cards I was sent part of that aces I was destin to catch cases one of the greatest to never make it it's been a long war to find my way out the snake pit the the pain I couldn't evade it the pain I couldn't take it so I learned how to move best at night like a vampire I can't stand the light but I still fight for what's righteous and im gonna stand on that till my body is lifeless do you know what it's like to get painted the villein lost in a mental health crisis they try to dim your light when you shine the brightest I⁵£@⅘#⁵_'m a ppxmass baby I was born to shine brighter than the brightest light gets until they turn of my light switch I'm in the fight of my life bitch I'm ambidextrous I can switch it up to south paw
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Yo @venomsmoke! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'the storm'! 💥 Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍 Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Amazing emotion on this one, it's a skill to let yourself out on tracks. 💜 First of all, your wordplay and honest lyrics are so dope and we appreciate you sharing such a track! Sometimes your flow is a bit to quick for the beat, but overall this track has great potential and with a few fixes it will be a gem of a track! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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